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I like it. It will probably be the first fic I've read in entirety since <i>A New Menace</i>.
At 3:17:34 PM on 6/16/2002, Chavez said:
im likeing it. It could turn out to be a very good story! Very good detail
At 1:56:56 AM on 6/15/2002, CarnaRaptor said:
jango, its useless you and your little asstwin clan can quit tryin so hard...really just crawl back into the depths of shytland
thanks again for the comment :)
At 8:27:11 PM on 6/14/2002, Jango Fett said:
<font color=Orange><em>A MUST READ</em> -CarnaRaptor</font>
<font color=Blue>Yeah it is a must read if you like fics that SUCK. I'm not even gonna bother checking out the next chapter.</font>
At 5:46:18 PM on 6/14/2002, CarnaRaptor said:
Carnaraptor Speaks: Im almost saddened to hear thats the only way you could get back at me for saying your story sucks. trust this, save urself
At 4:45:26 PM on 6/14/2002, Giant Wang said:
The Wang Speaks: Boring...
Sucked!
At 6:17:35 PM on 6/13/2002, Carnotaur3 said:
This is an improvement to your prologue, which I thought was ok. This story is looking better! Good work, Carna!
At 3:55:59 PM on 6/13/2002, Brad said:
Good work, Mr. Crichton. ;)
At 1:42:56 AM on 6/13/2002, HOYT said:
So far so good... keep up the quality of storytelling! I enjoy the placement of your story within the Jurassic Park Saga!
At 8:52:45 PM on 6/12/2002, Scarlet Spider said:
Fantastic!
At 8:21:22 PM on 6/12/2002, Scarlet Spider said:
Sounds great!
At 7:24:27 PM on 6/12/2002, CarnaRaptor said:
Thanks guys
Oh, and dont count on much action soon- i guess only tru fanfictionaaires will appreciate this at the beginning
At 7:04:43 PM on 6/12/2002, Vader said:
Even better than the prologue - this chapter seems to be set at a nicer pace, the diologue has slightly improved. I'm glad you aren't rushing into action scenes - rather that hurry it up near the beginning, I like it when writers take the time to establish the story (which is what I try to do with all of my stories, since I feel its vital.)
Good work. :)
<i>-Vader
Admin and Writer of Dan's Page
<a href="http://www.dansjp3page.com/fanfic/Vader-Leviathans__Special_Edition_-_Feature_Presentation.asp"><font color=Orange>LEVIATHANS: SPECIAL EDITION</a></i></font>
At 5:00:21 PM on 6/12/2002, Jurassic_Justin said:
very cool...one of the best dialogue scenes I have read in a while...
Grade: A-
<a href="http://www.jurassicjustin.jp3hq.com/">JurassicJustin.com</a>
<font color=Goldenrod>"These creatures aren't magical, they are made of flesh and blood. You get to the heart, YOU BRING DOWN THE BEAST." ~Matthew McConeaghey (Van Zan), Reign of Fire (July 12th, 2002)
At 4:27:16 PM on 6/12/2002, RaptorHiss said:
Very cool indeed, this story is really shaping up:)
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