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<font color=skyblue>Awesome! I loved it</font>
At 9:20:17 PM on 1/15/2002, rex_defender said:
very nice chapter, this is turning out to be a very good story.
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At 7:33:51 PM on 1/15/2002, Zap Madrigal said:
Yeah I agree really good dialogue. nice strong characters too.
Would like to see these 3 chapters extended (3 times their current length) with more background and character development but that's because I'd like the pace to build slower - more like a novel.
I Like the "walking with beasts" scenario being set up too. Makes a nice change from "and then the spino ripped out his throat" clones.
Very good!
At 7:08:12 PM on 1/15/2002, Ambrose said:
Very nice Carna. The Dialogue is very well done. the chap was a lil short though. But that's because of the dialogue. this isn't a bad thing! :o) I have a feeling that the next chapter will have some nice action in it.
-Ambrose
At 6:47:46 PM on 1/15/2002, raptorman69 said:
<font color=Silver>Well done. Keep it up.
At 6:45:07 PM on 1/15/2002, Vader said:
Well, I suspect some action to arrive soon. :) Good job.
At 6:41:42 PM on 1/15/2002, Jester Pocus™ said:
<font color=Red>Very nice well done the plot seems to be coming together now and i can predict what will happen next Great Job
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