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At 11:09:53 PM on 1/14/2002, Vader said:
Once again, very good job. I'm looking forward to the next installment and I wish you luck with the future chapters! :D
At 5:21:06 PM on 1/14/2002, firebird said:
great, btw, nice poster :-)
At 3:20:32 PM on 1/14/2002, CarnaRaptor said:
thanks darkunter :)
At 7:18:56 AM on 1/14/2002, dark hunter said:
very very nice,, what's evryone's problems with shortness? it doesn't matter, it's attention to detail that matters, and all the detail we need is here, the numbness of his hand, the lace of his wife-to-be's bra, everythings fine, the quality of this story is top notch, great work Carnaraptor
~Dark Hunter
At 10:58:24 PM on 1/13/2002, JPExciter said:
good descriptions
At 9:26:56 PM on 1/13/2002, Carnotaur3 said:
Short but good. I like the details behind the characters. Something I wish I had in my script, but I was dealing with a script so... Can't wait for the next chapters.
At 9:05:20 PM on 1/13/2002, beno_yo said:
Good first 2 chapters. Can't wait to see the finished product...
--Ben The Flooder Slayer & Admin--
At 5:50:16 PM on 1/13/2002, AlanGrant5 said:
Cool! I see reading Ice's sex scenes, has paid off, lol. Great job CarnaRaptor, can't wait for Chapter 3! :)
At 5:31:20 PM on 1/13/2002, Dark Element said:
Again, short. I think you should have put the first and second chapters together. But still good none the less.
6 out of 10.
At 4:54:02 PM on 1/13/2002, Ambrose said:
Wow, sex scene, didn'y see any of these in muertes, kewl stuff. Lil short though. thats okay still luv it.
At 4:11:29 PM on 1/13/2002, Icebreaker said:
<font color=skyblue>This is the first sex scene I have read that HASN'T come from me...LoL, pretty CooL stuff</font>
At 3:01:09 PM on 1/13/2002, CarnaRaptor said:
lol thx
At 2:59:42 PM on 1/13/2002, Jester Pocus™ said:
<font color=Blue> Once again Carna great chapter this is gettin better btw nice lil love scene lol
At 2:44:19 PM on 1/13/2002, TyrannoRex112 said:
cool
At 2:30:44 PM on 1/13/2002, raptorman69 said:
Nice :)
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