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Carnaraptor! It was ok not much action but good so far.
At 11:01:10 PM on 1/14/2002, Vader said:
<font color=RedVery, very good job. I thoroughly enjoyed this. If you keep it up, this will be just as good as Muertes!</font>
At 5:19:20 PM on 1/14/2002, firebird said:
freaking awaesome! cant wait til next next chap! oh wiat, it is already out :-)
At 1:12:30 AM on 1/14/2002, dark hunter said:
very nice, char dev is always good, it helps set the scene for upcoming action, i can't wait
~Dark Hunter
Jurassic Park: The End - Book 1 &
Jurassic Park Chaos
On fan fiction board now!
At 10:55:24 PM on 1/13/2002, JPExciter said:
nice
At 8:59:16 PM on 1/13/2002, Carnotaur3 said:
Great carnaraptor. I see it gives a little refrence to TLW's scene int he book with Levine and Malcolm!
At 5:46:14 PM on 1/13/2002, CarnaRaptor said:
boring? oh sorry i didnt have action sequences at every corner of the chapter
At 5:25:38 PM on 1/13/2002, Dark Element said:
Good story so far. Even though it was kinda boreing, and the teacher sounds like a mix of scottish, irish, and english all pulled into one.
6.2 out of 10
At 5:10:29 PM on 1/13/2002, Mega T.rex 14 said:
Great story so far!
At 1:19:06 PM on 1/13/2002, CarnaRaptor said:
this is pretty much a character dev. chapter...chapter 2 is also, but there will be a romance scene
Im takin my time on this story, "detail makes the story"
At 1:13:29 PM on 1/13/2002, AlanGrant5 said:
Great job! This being a chapter devoted (I assume) to character development, this was an awesome chapter. :)
At 1:09:07 PM on 1/13/2002, Icebreaker said:
<font color=skyblue>Good Story so far...not much has happened of course but I like your attention to detail</font>
At 12:51:18 PM on 1/13/2002, CarnaRaptor said:
lol, thank you alot ambrose..altho i dunno if thats a compliment to ICETERIA or a dis to MUERTES.
haha
At 12:49:14 PM on 1/13/2002, Ambrose said:
awsome work! let me tell you, this is 10000000000 times better than Muertes, i see your writting has become better than before. another thing, its good that you did something original rather than do another JP fan Fic. this is very well written i hope you continue to write this story.
-Ambrose
At 12:38:26 PM on 1/13/2002, Jester Pocus™ said:
<font color=Blue> very interesting
At 12:26:55 PM on 1/13/2002, Spinoboy11 said:
Cool plot, good writing. Can't wait for the next one! P.S.:Could you comment on mine?
At 12:24:23 PM on 1/13/2002, TyrannoRex112 said:
Great
At 12:22:25 PM on 1/13/2002, rex_defender said:
very nice. nice plot
At 12:13:18 PM on 1/13/2002, goldrex said:
exellent man i commented on yours you comment on mine :)
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