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I love the dialogue in this chapter, it was some really great stuff!
And I love your little understatement in the one liner for this chapter:
"Shane attempts to restore Marty's memory, but a small side effect switches his, Marty, River, and Joey's minds with each others bodies."
Just a small side effect? lol
Oh and at the end, that's not Tara. . . . it's The Host, I'm certain of it!
I look forward to more!
-- JPJunkee
At 9:17:13 PM on 2/7/2003, Dac said:
Awesome, this is cool!
And looks like Bob's little "Make Dac dumb" trick is wearing off a bit...the evil still works but the intelligence goes up a bit
At 5:51:28 PM on 2/7/2003, Vader said:
"Joey/River: Hey! I was on the phone.
Host: The Mayor hates rude kids.
Joey/River: And I hate mythological beings that can’t be destroyed. Do you see me crying about it?"
LOL, thats some great dialogue.
Nice episode, very enjoyable. :D
At 4:54:06 PM on 2/7/2003, yvonne said:
I loved how you handled the boys being in different bodies. It took a minute to figure it all out ... the note at the top helped a lot. :) Although, I think there may be one mix-up in there, between the names ..... this could just be me mixed up, though. :)
And now the good guys know that Bob and The Host are working together. Good job by River/Joey and Marty/Shane, in figuring that out. :)
The Falcon Glick parts were amusing, once again, but my favorite line this time around was:
Joey/River: And I hate mythological beings that can’t be destroyed. Do you see me crying about it?
Joey used to get on my nerves, but now I'm kind of liking him. lol.
Great job, Ben. This series is always the tops, in terms of quality entertainment. You can quote me on that in your reviews section, on your site. :)
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