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That was a very satisfying ending to a great season, Ben. Very nice. :)
I especially liked how you cut back and forth quickly between Ben and Bob when their plans were being told. That was cool.
Host coming through like that was awesome. I'm glad he was able to remain true to his word and stay on Ben's side.
It's always nice how you tie all the loose ends up, too. You're very dedicated to the series and it's sad to see it end .... but like Dac and Kyle said, he do have Falcon to look forward to!
.... And my character (Michelle) scored with the up and coming studly dude! Woot! hehe
Great job on Slayer! You should be proud. It was a thrilling and fun ride. :)
At 2:12:49 AM on 11/16/2003, Dac said:
I thought Vader got away
At 11:35:11 PM on 11/15/2003, JPJunkee said:
Before reading this, I was really trying to think out of how this would all be ended. How it would put closure on the Slayer series, yet also lead into Falcon series. I thought of a few possibilities, but after reading this, I like your version much more. :)
My favorite part was Host's sacrifice and the realization that wow, hey, he was a Slayer. Nifty end to Bob and Host, Ben. Just downright nifty.
The big battle between all the evil thingies and good people was . . . less detailed than I would have liked, personally. But, the added effect of having the Slayer's lose their power, and then the appearance of Dac kind of made up for this. The fight with SUPERBOB (make a series about SuperBob, except make it like a comic book, you know, SuperBob is on the way! here he comes to save the day! that sort of thing) or the Master as he was called, apparently. . . that was just cool! Nice detail but yet it moved at a very furious pace. Falcon's lines were great, too, as always.
The ending moments were nice as well. Falcon coming into his office and seeing beaten Toby and Amber was creepy cool. I really like where this is leading with the Falcon series.
Anyway! To make a long comment short. . . it kicked ass Ben, it really did. I can't think of a more appropriate way to end the series that for some time now has brought be some great entertainment. Good job, and I look forward to reading all the other tales you have hidden away in your noggin.
-- JPJunkee
At 9:09:53 PM on 11/15/2003, Ben said:
Falcon killed Vader, a few episodes ago actually...thanks for noticing ;);) Nah - It's all good though.
As for the grammar, I was kinda rushing through this - I had so many last minute things I wanted to do and I just didn't edit anything for some reason. Call me original, I guess. :)
At 6:07:09 PM on 11/15/2003, Dac said:
Wow...that's all I can say
That was the greatest of all the episodes, by far. It is simply the best
Grammar was a bit low at points, but who really cares?
I like the development of the characters, especially in the ending. That was really cool. All of it.
The battles rocked like hell. THey were awesome, that's all I can say
My only question is the notable abscence of Vader...I actually thought he would return.
Feels strange, knowing that it's all over...everything...all over
Well, not really over
There's still Falcon :D
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