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Alright! The real Ben is back!
This episode was much more fulfilling than the previous one, mostly because things actually happened to progress the mythology. So good job, Dac! :) I liked how you dealt with your character explaining his situation to the various groups of people, too. Made the reading go by fairly quick.
Looking forward to the whole pirate thing, too. I'll get to the next few episodes ASAP. :)
At 3:12:02 PM on 8/11/2003, HBK said:
At 1:55:31 PM on 8/9/2003, JPJunkee said:
Eddie: Heh, horny little idiot.
Haha!
Pretty nice episode, Dac! Indeed, the past/present tense problem was cleared up, and this episode flowed much better than the last in that respect. I must say though, that I liked the previous one more. It was just. . . .better (for lack of a better word). And, I kind of felt that some of the dialogue in this episode was a little bit iffy. . . Ben’s dialogue never seemed much like Ben. . . . But, I liked the bits with Dac being trusted again, and one of the group. . .
And I look forward to next week! If it’s as screwed up and twisted as you say, Ben, I’m sure I’ll enjoy it immensely.
-- JPJunkee
At 10:01:22 AM on 8/9/2003, Ben said:
Yeah - I actually liked this episode a litter better, then again, last weeks had to set up more of the story.
As for the Scythe Ending - that was all moi's doing. I had to find a way to connect episodes 5x10-5x12 and that's how I did it. Kinda corny, but I think the element worked.
Next week's episode is truly the most screwed up episode of the season because I think there are like six plot twists...manily, for anyone who remembers me wanting to do a Pirate-like theme at the end of Season 2, we're getting it now.
At 5:13:19 AM on 8/9/2003, Dac said:
I didn't write the whole thing at the end, with the scythe Ben and non-scythe Ben, but I did the rest. I think the whole past/present tense issue that happened last week was cleared up better this time
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