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I thought the truck sequence was pretty cool myself. And Shane using magic to help everyone was also a nice addition.
I think there were too many characters in the truck sequence though. That might explain why it was a little confusing. You switched back and forth too quickly, making it hard to keep an image in my head.
And what's with Michelle seducing River? Woah. She gets around! hehe
Mayor Bob passing a law like that .... evil! He's pretty clever, but EVIL! lol.
Sorry it took so long to read this, Ben. Glad I finally got to it though. :)
At 4:25:52 AM on 5/17/2003, Dac said:
Hey, it wasn't so bad. Shane and all the eye glowing and all that was pretty cool. It may not have been the greatest but it was pretty good anyway
At 1:08:39 AM on 5/17/2003, Ben said:
Yeah...the plot was too simple and I think I blew it a little out of porporition, whoops. Then again, regular shows have 22 episodes (roughly) a season, and not everyone likes the same episode or everyone dislikes the same one - this will prolly be one of those disliked ones... ;) Thanks though, Junkee!
At 12:47:41 AM on 5/17/2003, JPJunkee said:
Honestly, I'm going to have to say that was one of the more lackluster of almost all the episodes I've read. The comedy wasn't really funny. The dialogue was rather dull. And the action with the semi was a cool concept, but was confusing to visualize. I got lost on more than a few occasions during the semi scene.
I don't mean to sound harsh. But this just wasn't your best work. Not by far.
The ending was interesting though, it should lead to some interesting new episodes in the future.
-- JPJunkee
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