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That was fun to read. I especially liked all of the little comedy elements you've put into the story. Good job. I've only read a couple episodes of BTFS, but this Falcon character is a riot. Makes me want to go back and see just how evil he used to be.
And now Brad is trying to replace himself. That was probably the best move for him. I thought for a second there, when Rick was following him, that he was going to turn out being a bad guy. Glad that wasn't the case.
Looking forward to next Friday! :)
At 8:03:01 AM on 10/13/2002, dark hunter said:
im back to commenting, very nicely done Ben, very nice indeed, i enjoyed, please keep it up
~Dark Hunter
At 11:44:03 PM on 10/11/2002, Dac said:
I like, I like
Do I show up in this Series?
At 8:41:55 PM on 10/11/2002, Rick Arnold said:
Very sweet Ben. Keep going
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