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Another nice episode! The way Amber "admires" Ryan is very entertaining. She's a riot. And speaking of Ryan, it's cool to see him joining the cast! And Marty, too. Makes for a good Team Falcon.
One of my favorite parts:
Ben: I sense a vampire.
Falcon: Duh. I'm right here. Aren't you just being a comedian.
BEN looked at FALCON and a "What the f*ck are you talking about?" expression appeared on his face.
Ben: Not you.
hehe ... I love Falcon. I'm glad you decided to devote a series to him. :)
Oh, and I think I got a little confused, Ben. I don't remember Toby being killed, like he was shown at the beginning of this episode. Maybe I missed an episode somewhere?
Anywho! Good job!
At 11:39:18 PM on 12/26/2003, JPJunkee said:
Hush Pilf! Don't make me get the hose!
Ahem. . .
'Ryan: This is actually pretty tight.
Falcon: Thanks, I had the Martha Stewart of Vampires come and decorate for me.
Ryan: I thought she was a demon.
Falcon: Oh…that’s right she is. I guess I could’ve called her.'
lol, damn straight! Best piece of dialogue in the episode.
Pretty cool stuff, Ben! It's good to see both Ryan and Marty (woo!) are part of the team now. Cool! Also, Matt (or the Host with the, uhh, most?) is alive again. . . while I liked his death, it's nifty that he's back. And I really do love almost all of the dialogue exchanged between the characters, it flows very well. All in all a nice entertaining and easy to read episode. Good work! :)
-- JPJunkee
At 8:29:31 PM on 12/23/2003, PiLFerZ said:
it is fucking terrible. sounds like a bad short story someone would write for 7th grade english class. Stop wasting your time.
At 6:53:32 PM on 12/21/2003, Dac said:
Pretty cool...but you left out the fact that Yours Truly killed Glass when Bob controlled him
No matter. Other than that, nice work! Marty was a cool addition; he was always good
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