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means the user is online now! At 12:06:48 AM on 1/25/2006, Dac said: Not bad!
Short, snappy dialogue, which made the characters interesting. THis installment really focused more on the characters than the story, but I'm guessing that will be made up for in later chapters
Good concept (although the title has been used before). I wonder if I'd be a Dan's member or a UFX member in all this. Anyway, looking forward to next installment. Good work!
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