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means the user is online now! At 6:46:53 PM on 2/3/2006, Dac said: Yeah, I got the joke. Had a good chuckle at that one
Interesting thought with the UFX POV thing, could work quite well. Could also blow up, but looking at these I'm confident you could make them work very well
At 5:14:15 AM on 2/3/2006, Aragorn said: Oh, and the line
'It was either Frodo_Baggins or Mikeymike. I couldn’t remember which was which as they both looked eerily similar.'
is kind of an inside joke/nod to how MM kept coming back under different names, but denying they were him, and as you obviousy know, FB was one of his many names.
Sure, they're on the good side, but neither had any lines and one's dead while the other is never seen again in the rest of the series as of yet. I just needed a couple non big names there and figured they'd do.
At 5:10:25 AM on 2/3/2006, Aragorn said: My original plan (For this, I'll translate from the original terms to the Dan Fic temrs), my plan was to have Season 1 as 12 episodes, each from the POV of Dan Members, and then Season 2 start off from the POV of a UFXer, who ends up changing sides and that's when main UFXers would be coming in and being regonized by name.
I'm still undecided yet as to if I'll continue writing after I post these first 5 (The first complete story arc), but I do have very brief jot-notes for the following two episodes after these 5.
At 2:03:56 AM on 2/3/2006, Cameron said: Awsome. the newbies are finally appearing, i was wondering if it would happen.
At 3:42:25 PM on 2/2/2006, Dac said: I'll admit it was a shock to see Mikeymike/Frodo_Baggins appear at all, much less as two people on the good side. Bizarre
Again, a few small grammar errors but nothing to start screaming about
This chapter was a much-more character-based story, which was good. THere's always an angst character but never usually an explanation as to why, and the fact that you managed to work that in is impressive
I do enjoy the battle scenes, very fast-paced. Damn, I want that bus. Be nice if we could get some UFX member names once in a while, though. If you want I could give you some. Anyways, nice work
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