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means the user is online now! At 10:22:11 PM on 1/27/2006, Dac said: Interesting pattern, with a story being told from more than one perspective. Should make for interesting development of the difference between narrating characters.
Again, a few spelling and grammar errors, but nothing to worry about. This chapter was shorter but had more character development than the last, which was well done.
Stuck alone with Cameron and Chase...what did I do to deserve that?! ;)
At 10:53:44 PM on 1/26/2006, Seth Rex said: good story.
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