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It hurt when Allison slapped Jeff
At 9:02:35 AM on 1/19/2006, Jason Bourne said:
oh.
At 9:02:33 AM on 1/19/2006, Jason Bourne said:
oh.
At 4:23:48 PM on 1/18/2006, Aragorn said:
Yeah, that wa sone thign I picked up on when i re-wrote it. They have nevr been in the school before, yet seem to know their way around and already have established lockers and such. But I wouldn't even dream fo fixing that. If I do, it's no longer the story i wrote back in 1999. Plus that's what the partly what the remake novel was for, to fix things like that.
At 2:58:23 PM on 1/18/2006, Troodontid said:
I enjoyed the SD Novel and this is looking to be a great addition.
Though one thing that sticks out during the original (I can see what you meant by being an older piece of writing) When being chased Jeff isn't confused of where to turn or go- which is kinda weird considering it's a new school and all.
I'm probably reading too much into it though- but a great story so far.
At 11:51:47 AM on 1/18/2006, Aragorn said:
I think you are mistaken. THIS is the original School Day. What I posted last year was the novel, which is a REMAKE of this story.
And I did type it in word, and copy and pasted.
At 8:32:45 AM on 1/18/2006, Jason Bourne said:
Great story. However, I still prefer the storyline of the original School Day you posted last year. Why don't you type it up on Microsoft Word and copy and paste to make it a bit more readable?
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