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means the user is online now! At 4:41:12 AM on 1/11/2005, Dac said: Still a couple of Jeff/Jacob slips, and a couple of grammar mishaps but very good. If this was fiction and not fact [though (don't take this personally) I get the feeling there's a bit of exxageration here and there) I would say the fight was very well written and described for an ordinary fistfight. But firsthand accounts are always the best in description, very nice job
I also think Lisa should've sent some of those egg bombs into your principal's office
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