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means the user is online now! At 4:07:30 PM on 9/21/2003, Vito_The_White said: Once again... You're still going toward this with the whole combining the movies and the novels the wrong way... It's all way to confusing to understand... The characters in this chapter also just seem way to out of the ordinary. They're freaking out a bit too much in my opinion about their plans.
At 11:44:17 AM on 6/24/2003, Amber said: Yah, I know it's a little short, but I want a sudden and imediate reaction... just before the next crucial portion of the story...
At 12:28:33 AM on 6/24/2003, JPJunkee said: Hmm, pretty good. A little short, but I liked it. Nice dialogue. :)
-- JPJunkee
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