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means the user is online now! At 3:17:57 PM on 9/21/2003, Vito_The_White said: This chapter was better then the last one... there were a lot of grammatical errors in this part... but the characters seemed realistic... I wasn't very comfortable with the whole suit thing... I don't really see why the Julio character would be wearing a suit in his home, especially when he was out in that calm place of his balcony where he was always in peace...
At 1:39:05 PM on 5/22/2003, Amber said: great... it will get really exciting soon....
At 11:35:55 PM on 5/20/2003, JPJunkee said: The plot thickens. . . I can see this becoming a very good JP story. So far, it's quite original, and the characters are written pretty well. I'm really enjoying it.
-- JPJunkee
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