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means the user is online now! At 4:21:56 PM on 9/21/2003, Vito_The_White said: Once again I press upon the whole movie vs. novel thing... There wasn't a Spinosaur on Sorna in TLW novel period, end of story. If this story is indeed a sequel to the novels then your writing is a bit flawed there. Sorna is very small in TLW novel... Just look at the map at the front of the novel... If there had've been a Spino in the novels, Malcolm and company, or even Dodgson and company would've saw it.
Otherwise Tim seems to be a little better in this part then he was in his first appearance. Amanda seems to be a likeable character as well.
At 11:48:18 AM on 6/28/2003, JPJunkee said: That was pretty good. Nice work. Sorry I don't exactly have a long comment to make. . . . but. . . . I'm looking forward to more!
-- JPJunkee
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