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An excellent start very funny and extremely well written. Obviously you do not have writer's block or this piece of art wouldn't have appeared.
It kept me amused and made me read through very quickly. The Dac, Ice and the snow cone scenario was funny as, and very amusing (i just said the same thing...twice!). Your writing grabs the readers attention and it holds.
Rating: 9/10
Excellent work man.
~Dark Hunter
At 12:13:41 AM on 8/16/2003, yvonne said:
I'm your long-time friend! Cool! hehe
That was great so far! Bring on more chapters! This is something very different and unique.
Can't wait to read more! It's a great start. :)
At 12:23:12 AM on 8/15/2003, JPJunkee said:
Nothing like giving yourself a big pat on the back, eh AG5? Hehe
That was pretty good stuff, man! I liked the bit about Dac and Ice’s history, and then how Dac is on a dolly with a facemask on, but yet is still taken to the awards ceremony and after party. Now, this is the prologue, and I usually don’t have much to say in a prologue’s comments, as there is really not much to judge. But, I will say, that I like the way this story is going. It’s an interesting take on DanFiction here, and I like it so far. I hope following chapters will prove to be just as entertaining.
-- JPJunkee
At 1:42:17 PM on 8/14/2003, Carnotaur3 said:
AG5, your such a great writer, even if it's a Dan's fic. Awesome stuff, now put my name in there LOL
At 12:46:21 PM on 8/14/2003, Guilty Spark said:
Great work!
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