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means the user is online now! At 6:15:46 AM on 10/21/2006, Dac said: Fucking Shakespeare. I like it
At 8:36:18 PM on 10/20/2006, rez4prezsezrez said: I have a semi just reading this shit.
At 1:15:26 PM on 10/19/2006, yvonne said: There's been so many weird things on Broadway, that people in fish suits talking about sex doesn't seem so out of place. hehe
Funny little story.
At 12:54:59 AM on 10/19/2006, AlanGrant5 said: Hey, thanks for reading guys!
Martin- Yeah, I agree, the ending is weak. I wrote this thing in an hour flat and turned it in to my creative writing professor, so the last few bits of it are kinda rushed. But I definitely think that Joey gettin' a last word would be fitting.
Alpha- I know they don't have actual intercourse, but did YOOOOU know that.... they can't drive underwater bubble-crafts? :P
Could you imagine if this were performed on Broadway? Holy crap that would be screwed up... especially with the fish suits haha
At 2:26:24 PM on 10/18/2006, alpha1 said: I smell a blockbuster. People in salmon suits talking about sex. It'll be a hit.
At 2:24:51 PM on 10/18/2006, alpha1 said: Funny. Salmon don't actually have intercourse, but then, that isn't the point..
At 9:57:45 AM on 10/18/2006, MartinRandle said: LOL very funny
but I thought the ending was a little weak. Could do with a punch line. Like some smart comment by a dying Joey.
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