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Wow, wow, wow, wow. Did I mention wow?
You have no idea how close to home that story is for me.
Beautifully written to the point where I could feel myself standing in the grocery store.
Loved it.
At 7:33:23 PM on 7/27/2006, yvonne said:
Every time I read something of yours, I'm instantly reminded why you're one of my favorite writers on this site.
You have a great way with words, Devin. Your dialogue was very realistic and even though the story was short, I think the Chris character was developed well.
Commenting on the story itself, I really enjoyed it. It's nice to see the positive impact strangers can have on one another. You just never know where and when you might find encouragement and inspiration. It was a very nice, feel-good, short story. Good job!
But ... why is this guy selling alcohol to drunk minors?! BAD! ;)
At 11:12:03 AM on 7/26/2006, dark hunter said:
Really nice story. Good characterisation and good conversation too. Just a really nice story. It's made my night...
~K
PTFO
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