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very very cool, great story
~Dark Hunter
At 8:34:36 PM on 3/10/2002, AlanGrant5 said:
Thanks Vito! I should of put "A Novel Based on the Motion Picture", because it isn't supposed to take place after the events of "The Lost World" novel, but rather "TLW" film.
At 8:32:21 PM on 3/10/2002, AlanGrant5 said:
Yeah I took out the parasailing scene mostly because that whole situation was kinda corny. (The whole detaching themselves from a boat that suffers but a few scratches)... plus I'm still not entirely sure as to what killed the men on the boat (the script says pteranodons, yet they are locked up in the aviary). Anywho thanks for the comments! There will be more to come! :)
At 8:30:32 PM on 3/10/2002, Vito Hardy said:
Very interesting, however the San Diego incident has yet to occur in the novel format. You might want to edit all of that man and make it more of a sequel to the novels since this is a novel sequel:) Good job though. Better then my prologue that's for sure
At 8:01:25 PM on 3/10/2002, RaptorHiss said:
Awesome, it's so believable, because we actually know what the characters look like in real life, which makes it all the easier to imagine:)
Very good, and fun to read to:)
At 7:59:48 PM on 3/10/2002, Brad said:
I agree completely with Ambrose, this is great! I was surprised to see you leave out the parasailing, which never looked great on screen.
At 7:56:31 PM on 3/10/2002, Ambrose said:
Awsome A5!! Man this is going to be a great story, the dialogue is better than in the movie. I hope you add some new elements like the landing in this chapter. You are one of the most skilled writters on this board and I know you will make this story rock. Good luck...
-Ambrose
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