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I love how you explain the plot with dialogue. It's so much more enjoyable, for me at least, to learn about what's going on from dialogue. That way I feel like I'm standing right next to the main character (John in this case), and I'm learning only the things that he's learning. Of course, there are a few details thrown in to get me even more intrigued, and you do that well also.
I'm not sure if I explained that right. lol. Hopefully you get the meaning. :)
Very good story so far.
At 4:54:35 PM on 6/11/2002, angel_89 said:
Great job, I'm really looking forward to reading more chapters in the book!
At 12:18:25 PM on 6/10/2002, Carnotaur3 said:
Same here Carna. Very cool chapter! ::Starts to shudder::
Will something bad happen??? LOL
At 11:22:36 AM on 6/10/2002, CarnaRaptor said:
The chapter wasnt top tier - but the conversation between Brian and John was rather interesting.....though i must admit "Relax we have taken more precautions than InGen" gives me an uneasy feeling
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