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At 10:04:15 PM on 6/9/2002, Sikotic said:
It's well written with a nice descriptions and plot.
Wait...what else did you tell me to say...oh yes....I cannot wait for the next installment.
* * * * 1/2 turds
At 1:32:43 PM on 6/9/2002, CarnaRaptor said:
Fine work Alan, cant wait for more installments
At 9:38:32 AM on 6/9/2002, dark hunter said:
nicely written AG5.
Great use of a family to start it off, and the talk between the father and the son was very well written.
The incorperation of the JP idea is great as well. All up this sounds like an awesome idea for JP4
~Dark Hunter
At 7:12:03 PM on 6/7/2002, AlanGrant5 said:
I didn't blow up Sorna... I left it to the Costa Rican Government :)
At 5:47:54 PM on 6/7/2002, Illiteration said:
you blew up sorna? most of my story ideas involve the destruction of sorna...it just makes sense
At 1:27:06 AM on 6/4/2002, Chaotician said:
Great, great entertainment.
The depth of your characters is wonderful.
Your flow is very smooth and comfortable, it draws the reader in.
Can't wait for more ! :)
At 12:49:52 AM on 6/4/2002, RaptorHiss said:
Very cool AG5:) You incorporated the speech from JP wonderull, giving it something fresh, yet something rememberfull:)
I enjoyed it very much, and hope you continue on with it:)
At 10:27:14 PM on 6/3/2002, yvonne said:
Another good and solid start to a story. :)
I love how you describe the surroundings. It makes it very easy to imagine the locations, where the characters are.
At 9:13:58 PM on 6/3/2002, TyrannoRex112 said:
Wow! Real nice! Keep it up!
At 6:35:54 PM on 6/3/2002, raptorfreak said:
A very good beginning to the story, not to be critical of your writing, but I've noticed that you've started many stories with good potential then given up.
I hope you stick with this one.
At 10:17:36 PM on 6/2/2002, Vader said:
Greatly written and good idea for a JP4! I like that timeline you used, as well. :)
At 8:18:03 PM on 6/2/2002, jp said:
I want to ask in the three new jurassic park books dr.grant turned isla sorna in to a nature perserve for the dinosaurs
At 8:14:34 PM on 6/2/2002, JPLuNaTiC said:
Awesome writing. I love the way it plays out sort of like the JP novel with the conversing and what not but with a whole new respect and character... I shall be following it from now on...
At 8:08:07 PM on 6/2/2002, Jurassiclaw said:
Very well written. Nice use of Bob Morris' speech in the JP Novel, and John Weller having funding in Alberta. It's a very good twist of using that sub-plot for a JP4. I'll keep reading. Good stuff.
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