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very good, alangrant5. very, very good. this is how the movie should have been done. execellent writing. almost worthy of crichton himself(almost:-))i am looking forward to the next installment.
p.s.-you should let the people w/ guns live a little longer, and maybe kill a few raptors. you should also do some stuff w/ eric when he is alone on the island. just some suggestions! :-)
p.s.s-let the rex live longer. :-)
At 11:31:32 PM on 4/14/2002, Carnotaur3 said:
Now, AlanGrant5, go and check out the newest parts of Home Sweet Home! HEHE :)
At 9:11:23 PM on 4/14/2002, Vito Hardy said:
Exactly! Then Malcolm could've went instead!:)
At 8:09:20 PM on 4/14/2002, Carnotaur3 said:
That was great! An awsome read! Dude, your the one that should've written the novilzation isntead of that Scott guy.
At 7:12:28 PM on 4/14/2002, AlanGrant5 said:
Yea, actually the scene from GENESIS is very similar to that of JPIII, lol. If I would of mentioned Malcolm then that would defeat the purpose of Grant. :)
At 5:12:03 PM on 4/14/2002, RaptorHiss said:
I think it's safe to say that your writing skills are good enough to write a JP:TE book:)
Good job, I enjoyed it very much:)
At 5:04:18 PM on 4/14/2002, Mr Goodbytes said:
Very good.
At 4:09:32 PM on 4/14/2002, Vito Hardy said:
LOL man. You used a scene from Genesis, but changed a little of it around. That's ok though. He during the little dinner date, Grant should've meantioned Ian Malcolm as to have been to the islands twice and survived and all. Then the Kirby's would've known that Grant wasn't the best and Malcolm was:)
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