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Very cool that you've merged Genesis with your newest JP story. This is going to be an interesting read. Good start so far. :)
At 12:00:00 AM on 8/29/2002, ToNy tHe T-ReX said:
I like it. I happened to read your original GENESIS story, and I did enjoy it---though I did notice a few character loopholes and some weak points in the story. You seem to have the character of Ian Malcolm down pretty well---just to say he is my favorite character to write for---and I'm already a fan of this Rick Sampson character---I like the personality traits that you have going for him, and I think that his personality will provide for some entertaining dialogue during this story---as you said, I can already sense a tension between Ian and Sampson. I also liked your opening better---I think that the other Genesis story was little jaunty in the opening, and it all happened too easy. A stegosaur miraculously walking in front of the road was a little unbelievable, maybe too unbelievable. And I think the gloomy, mysterious kind of gentre you went with in the beginning of this is very good. I'd like to see how Alan Grant makes a contribution to the story also, and I'm looking foward to seeing how this story progreses----Anthony S.
At 12:00:00 AM on 8/29/2002, TyrannoRex112 said:
Yes, very good. I like it. :)
At 12:00:00 AM on 8/28/2002, Carnotaur3 said:
It's good considering it was your first fan-fic here. :)
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