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Excellent read. I couldn't have written something as phonominal myself!
At 8:54:29 PM on 11/10/2002, RaptorHiss said:
(Shoving Eintein's brain up your ass wouldn't make you smarter, it give you the runs;))
AG5....wow! You never fail to make me jealous when you write, and how easily you can write such belieable dialouge(Something I have to improve on myself)
4.5/5 easily, if not a 5/5:)
At 7:09:23 PM on 11/9/2002, Dilophosaur7 said:
Great writing,*claps* I could not of done better even if you shoved Albert Enstein`s Brain up my ass.
Bravo!
At 2:37:13 AM on 11/9/2002, yvonne said:
AG5, I only have one regret while reading these two chapters. The regret of not reading them sooner.
This was a wonderfully written piece of work that really seemed to affect me. It seemed very heartfelt and it definitely comes across in a powerful way. I was especially impacted by this line:
"I’ll call you later," Daniel's last words had been. He never did.
Excellent writing.
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