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Yea great job, good description and character development, i will be waiting for the next chapter
At 10:12:48 PM on 12/31/2002, Vader said:
Already, you are outdoing the original Halloween, IMO. You write with vivid destail, and show the character's emotions very clearly. This is a more character oriented horror story, which is refreshing.
Keep it up. :)
At 7:31:36 PM on 12/31/2002, Vito_The_White said:
That was a very wonderful, emotional, and sad chapter man. I was to the point of almost crying when John was making his speach about his mother. I more then likely would have if his speach had've been a little longer. I saw Halloween Resurrection last night, and I pretty much agree with Yvonne about the movie. The beginning was the best and only meaningful part to it. However, there was one character that i really enjoyed. He was the one that was played by Ryan Merriman. He was one of the few that lived and he messed around with the computers throughout the movie. A sideline character pretty much. It would be interesting to see him in this great story if it were possible, but I'm really enjoying how this story is going. You have always been great at your dialogue and descriptions. Your character development is also very amazing. You're someone to definately look up to and that's no mistake.
I can't wait to read the next part in this amazing story that blows most of the other Halloween movies out of the water in only the prologue and chapter 1.
At 4:09:31 PM on 12/31/2002, yvonne said:
I was, unfortunetly, one of those people who saw Halloween Resurrection. lol. You did a great job summing up what happening in the .... well ... the only really meaningful part of that whole movie. The beginning. lol.
When John thought he saw Michael Myers in the Cathedral, it gave me goose bumps. I'm looking forward to how this story progresses. :)
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