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Time and time again, you remind me why I believe that you are the best writer here, AG5. :)
Telling the story through John is a good idea, too. And, like others have said, it was interesting to read about what the characters were thinking.
Excellent start to a story. Please, add more soon. :)
At 1:38:41 AM on 12/27/2002, JPJunkee said:
Woah, that was a creepy last paragraph. Just that last paragraph alone makes me want to return to read more.
The rest was also great. I especially liked how you did the character's thoughts.
Excellent start to a story, that I would never have read if it were not for the fact that you are such a good writer.
-- JPJunkee
At 8:34:35 PM on 12/26/2002, Vito_The_White said:
Very exciting. I really like how you've started this off. I only last year got into horror movies, thanks to one of my best friends, and I believe that this would make a great beginning to a good Halloween movie. Plus the dialogue, as Vader said is realistic. I believe it's much better then most dialogue that is put in horror movies these days. I can't wait to read more of this.
At 3:15:29 PM on 12/26/2002, Vader said:
Wonderfully vivid descriptions. You've given this story a very spooky, eerie mood, and it fits very well. The dialogue is realistic (you always have been good at that).
Great work. I look forward to reading more. :)
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