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It was sheer brilliance. Almost brought a tear to my eye. The way you described the action and how the sucho did things was just marvelous. This is the work of a modern day Shakespeare.
At 5:15:57 PM on 1/15/2002, John D. said:
I must say it was really good, but I read the other version to this part and for some reason I liked it better. Might be because I read it first and I kinda knew what was going to happen. I enjoyed the sucho attack, but I liked the fact he got him a snack in the other version...
At 3:36:12 PM on 1/15/2002, CarnaRaptor said:
Excellence, very well and the sucho was a great pic for this part
At 10:05:23 AM on 1/15/2002, AlanGrant5 said:
January 17th... but I'm still working out the ending.
At 9:41:45 AM on 1/15/2002, Seth Rex said:
hey i had my Bonzi Buddy read it to me and i must say the story was very cool :) so i'm gonna have Bonzi Buddy read the others
At 1:19:04 AM on 1/15/2002, Vader said:
Once again, great job on the sequence but I forgot something:
Didn't you say you were gonna release the fan-fic as a whole in January?
At 1:17:14 AM on 1/15/2002, Vader said:
Cool action sequence! It reminded me of a sequence I did a long, long time ago in the very early days of my fan-fic career. I really like how you played it out, it was great!
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