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means the user is online now! At 8:03:40 AM on 4/14/2003, SpinoMonkey said: too fast!
At 12:32:29 PM on 4/16/2002, Maester_Seymour said: It was good ... i know what you mean i read the book...
but it was fast...
At 7:07:10 AM on 4/16/2002, dark hunter said: sorry but what i reckon you should do is add your own stuff in there, sorta explain how the kid got there, it moved way too fast, you kinda need to take your time with fan fics
~Dark Hunter
At 8:59:03 PM on 4/15/2002, .Spinosaurus. said: i know ... that was all I could complete today.
At 8:43:35 PM on 4/15/2002, Mike007 said: It was way to fast
At 8:07:26 PM on 4/15/2002, Cao Cao said: good but not perfect like me!
At 7:57:20 PM on 4/15/2002, .Spinosaurus. said: Some mis spelled words but it is a good fic.
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